I do agree that it is biased even as someone who thinks you don't need to be dysphoric to be trans. Especially with the part about the "cis ideal". While there is a percentage of truscum that definetely think this (maybe even the majority, idk), it's not all of them and this article should reflect that. I do like your edit, but you should also reflect this percentage of truscum that do believe these transphobic views.
